Tuesday, June 7, 2011

Three Muses Challenge - Exotic Bird


(Exotic depends on your definition.)

19 comments:

Judy said...

A simple but very poignant piece, Bill!

Lori Saul said...

Love the beautiful sweetness and simplicity here Bill- your sensitive muse at play. Bravo from me!

ann said...

What a wonderful take on the challenge so sensitive and beautiful xx

Ozstuff said...

Bill, this is a wonderful piece. Your poem touched me greatly. I guess we all have those moments of reflection but we don't talk about them - or write about them. I have a teardrop in my eye too. Simply beautiful. I love your solitary little bird. Take a bow.

Yvonne said...

So powerful, Bill! I love it!

AJ Blanton said...

Beautiful poem. Simply Amazing!
AJ

Deann said...

Maybe not exotic but certainly riveting and touching in it's simplicity. Simply sincere and somewhat sad...but excellent.

Junibears said...

This is just you Sir William.
Very touching and just brilliant. I love it.xx

Rika said...

Just wonderful.

Lani Gerity said...

So lovely!

Linda Gibbons said...

Wonderful piece on so many levels, Bill. simple and elegant and deep.

indybev said...

Robert James Waller (he who wrote "Bridges of Madison County") wrote a little book of essays called "Old Songs in a New Cafe". Among them was a touching essay on Orange Band, the Last Dusky Seaside Sparrow. Your poem recalled that essay to me. If you can find a copy of the book, you might like to read it. Thanks for sharing your poetic talent, Bill!

Anonymous said...

Lovely, Bill

Taluula said...

Bill, this is so poignant. Hang on in there little bird!

Netty said...

Beautiful and enchanting piece of work. Annette

Gayle Page-Robak said...

So excellent, Bill!!

Rosie said...

Bill, what a lovely poem! I had a tear in my eye... Cute bird too! =)

Carolyn said...

WOW...says it all for this one.

Christine said...

The simpler the stronger a poem is. You understood it (without losing the sweetness...)